Here is the first page of a sales letter that can be used with this item.
This message in a bottle Can map out the hidden Profits in your business. Guaranteed...
Dear [personalized],
I'm [your name] with [name of company] and about a XXX ago I sent you an offer in a bank deposit bag. But I never heard from you!
I’m sending you a message in a bottle. Why? For two reasons.
- What I have to tell you is so important, I needed some way to MAKE SURE this letter got your attention.
- Since I'm about to show you how to achieve maximum [insert your benefit here] from your business, I thought a message in a bottle would really make the point. I also want to give you [insert your free gift] just for meeting with me.
Imagine you were walking on a beach and a message in a bottle was washed up on the shore. Would you pick it up? If this message had a map that showed you where to find hidden profit centers in your business would you read it? Guess what? Most people don't. They expect solutions to materialize without any outside help.
Unfortunately, it doesn't work that way. You see the difference between "ordinary" and "extraordinary" profits is found in that little "extra". That's what I'm an expert at finding. Those little "extras" that can mean huge cost savings and great boosts to your bottom line profits.
This little message in a bottle could actually show you your map of success. If you're alert, this just may be the message for you. I know that you are busy so let's get right to it.
Here's what it's all about. I specialize in showing people just like you how to:
- Save Money – [insert benefit how to save them money]
- Make more bottom line profits – [insert benefit how to increase profits]
- Reduce Stress – [insert benefit how to reduce stress]
- [List more benefits to client here]
- [List more benefits to client here]